I started trying to read an original English web novel yesterday and the writing was so painfully cringe it was horrendous.
Look I’m all for overpowered self insert fantasy fulfilment novels.
In fact they might even be my favourite type.

But there is something seriously wrong with your writing if the third chapter has a woman share a bed with the protagonist within an hour of them meeting, and then suddenly develop some weird dependency on the protagonist within a day of them meeting.
It’s just bad character writing.
Anyway, wouldn’t recommend it.

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