God’s Gofer Chapter 63

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Update on my progress with Dawntrail: The entire story so far has been me saying “They could have done this so much better if…” at all but about two scenes.
I don’t understand why they billed this expansion as a “summer vacation” when literally the weight of an entire continent is on your shoulders, and to make matters worst, you’re not even allowed to take direct action to resolve it! You’re telling me I am here to relax but then keep impressing on me that a crisis is imminent?

Also you have THREE characters that are directly relevant to the story why is only ONE of them talking non stop?! LET THE GIRL BREATHE!
I don’t even have anything against her but the two scenes I have actually enjoyed are ones where she is otherwise indisposed in some way.
Absolutely loved the sparring duel against her father, that was the first time in the story it felt like the Warrior of Light was just having fun with everything after saving the world for the nth time.
I also really liked the whole sequence of events where Wuk Lamat got kidnapped, not because I dislike her, but just because her absence let other characters actually do something
We finally got to spend time with other people! It did also help that the final part of that sequence was you getting to just have the imposing aura of someone who has seen it all, enough to set off warning bells in the young upstart and intimidate them.

Sorry for the sudden rant.
I will do it again.
This is both a promise and a threat.
(I think I am about a third of the way through the main story quest currently so updates are pending)

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