I spent all of today reading a mecha web novel.
The writing was pretty iffy and the translation was on the lower end.
But it was passable as reading material.

I spent most of the time reading it thinking about how I’d rewrite segments to improve the story.
I’d especially slow down the plot progression, each arc felt really short and some events were glossed over entirely.

Well, that’s just how I felt about it personally.
It reminded me of an old mecha novel I read at some point that I want to find again now.
I find it funny I remember that one so often and keep desiring to find it again.
There was nothing special about it but for some reason I can’t remember it.

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